Twilight looks just so really really nice except the neck it looks a little too long. other than that this is a really show accurate immage however this is my fav pony so just seeing her makes me think wow this is perfect! I like the sparkles you shose to draw, the mane colors and eyes looks really show accurate too however the horn is not the right length if you want to do a completely show accurate drawing look up the anathomy of the shows ponies. you're really close, but keep practicing im sure you will improve alot more from that.
Vision: You did exactly what should be done. Twilight Sparkle being Twilight Sparkle.
Originality: I've never seen anything like this before. Twilight in a wintry landscape, non related with winter wrap up.
Technique and Impact: With cannonlike traces, you perfectly retracted Twilight's amusement with something we can't see, and we try to guess what is. Her mane and tail sparkling, her eyes so brilliant, her amusement pose, all that light and shadow, everything pointing to a center that looks like it's out of screen, something that made me remember my old art classes about baroque. You just didn't get 5/5 in technique because we don't have the impression of seeing Twilight popping out of the screen, and you got 4.5/5 in impact because of one single deviation I saw some weeks ago that even made me cry. More impact than that, impossible.
Hey, I was wondering if I could use this piece of yours for my art project at the college. I'm on ART 1020 'Intro to Drawing,' and they told us to do a 'Technical Pen Stipple Drawing' with a picture of our choice, and yours seems perfect to draw because it meets all the requirements they asked for. Could I have your permission to use this piece?
Originality: I've never seen anything like this before. Twilight in a wintry landscape, non related with winter wrap up.
Technique and Impact: With cannonlike traces, you perfectly retracted Twilight's amusement with something we can't see, and we try to guess what is. Her mane and tail sparkling, her eyes so brilliant, her amusement pose, all that light and shadow, everything pointing to a center that looks like it's out of screen, something that made me remember my old art classes about baroque. You just didn't get 5/5 in technique because we don't have the impression of seeing Twilight popping out of the screen, and you got 4.5/5 in impact because of one single deviation I saw some weeks ago that even made me cry. More impact than that, impossible.
Congratulations for you work of art!
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