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Trying something new here. However long it takes me to finish it, I'll be updating this picture until it's done. In the meantime, I want people to basically try to point out anything that might look wrong or out of place when I update it so that I'm able to correct it. That way, there won't be any problems with it that I haven't noticed when it's completely done :)
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~Vunlinur Jun 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can't fav this.
Not Rarity with 2 legs. :[
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=ikillyou121 Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry. It's only a work in progress :) I'm re-submit it when it's fully complete and take this down. I'm just using this for criticism as it's being made.
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*LilMissFifiFlash Jun 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love Sweetie Belle with her wet mane
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~Rettro Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know what this picture is, so everything I say here may be complete BS. But hey, you asked for me to point stuff out so here it goes:

Her hair looks wet. If you're trying to do anything else, then the shadows are all off - you've got dark spots on the right, top, and top-left, which means the light would have to be just about up her nose. There is also a little bit where the left edge of the ear meets the edge of the hair, which I've never quite understood how it should be done, but the little purple up-arrow shape you've made looks a tad silly. I'd shift the dark grey of the ear's outline slightly more left so that the purple edge of the hair is more J shaped, with no tag on the right.
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=ikillyou121 Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And here's a link to what I'm trying to vector: [link]

Just so you have an idea of what it should look like.
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=ikillyou121 Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her hair is most certainly wet :) And I was thinking the point where the hair and ear meet up looked a little off. So I'll definitely move it to the left. Thanks for letting me know :la:
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~Rettro Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looking at the screenshot, I'd say you're spot on so far. I can't be sure since the background is so pink/purple but if I had to pick at differences I'd say your dark spots for the water may be too dark. As for the funny hair, that's exactly how it's done in the screenshot. Still looks silly XD
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=ikillyou121 Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :) Messy wet hair looks cute :p
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Mood: Adoration *DarthWill3 Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw...
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